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1 major fiction mistake, and a few minor ones.

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9-10-2020 21:19:10 Mobile | Show all posts |Read mode
You wouldn't believe how many blunders children's TV shows make. I now watch them regularly, and find at least 1 new mistake every month or so. It has what I call, the "GIVE 'EM IT ALL" mistake. That means the protagonists have things that makes what they plan to do, doable. In this case, almost doable. Since the protagonists do things like go to Australia to get a boomerang and back. In 11 hours (At most). Another minor mistake they make is super equality (In most episodes, there are an equal amount of people of colours and gender. Or at least I've observed so. Except pink. Normally fairness to all genders and races suffices, if you are trying to teach children equality.) And another minor mistake is leaving some things unexplained. This isn't too bad, but leaving to many things unexplained can create a few questions in the viewers minds (Yes, if the viewer has not seen surfing dogs and lives on the coast, and especially on Hawaii, will ask that question either to their parents or to themselves. Even 5 year olds.) and we writers like answering questions, or better yet, stopping them from even asking a question.

score 4/10

ishirmahadik 9 September 2020

Reprint: https://www.imdb.com/review/rw6077383/
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